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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:47 pm 
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Speechers have a thread for this, so I figured we should too. Basically, if you have a 1AC you want critiqued, post here and hopefully people will volunteer to critique it for you! Also, if you are willing to critique cases, you can post here so people who want critique can easily contact you.

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 Post subject: Re: 1AC critiques
PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:54 pm 
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I am always ready to offer my critiques of things especially those which I have little to no knowledge of!

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 Post subject: Re: 1AC critiques
PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 11:23 pm 
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I will critique a case for anyone who needs. Beware I will be at MA though ;)

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I would be happy to critique cases of any size, shape or subject via email or Skype. Just ping me via email at anthony(AT)why-debate.com

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 27, 2013 4:01 am 
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David Roth wrote:
I am always ready to offer my critiques of things especially those which I have little to no knowledge of!

Ditto.

If anyone wants a "layperson"'s review, I'd be happy to help. Of course, my layperson-ness wears off as the season progresses.... :)

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 4:29 am 
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I will also offer my case critiques. This is my second year debating, but I am very good at coming up with logical arguments and stock issues.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 11:39 pm 
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I'll critique if you want :)

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 23, 2013 3:04 am 
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This is funny... The only post are just people talking about how they will critique it...
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2013 6:36 pm 
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Simon Sefzik wrote:
This is funny... The only post are just people talking about how they will critique it...
:lol:

lol yeah... when I noticed the title, I figured this would happen. :P

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 9:08 pm 
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RyanM wrote:
I am very good at coming up with logical arguments and stock issues.


Seriously? Me too, I love coming up with stock issues. I just invented one recently called Legendarity, which calls into question the awesomeness of the case ;)

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 1:25 am 
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Simon Sefzik wrote:
This is funny... The only post are just people talking about how they will critique it...
:lol:


To make an analogy, It's an issue of clients looking for lawyers rather than lawyers looking for clients. Sharkfin gave us some valuable critique which have helped a lot with our 1AC :).

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2014 10:44 pm 
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Hey! Would anyone be willing to critique my case? I have the case outlined, not complete yet. But I could still use some input.


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 5:37 pm 
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andreanicoleperry wrote:
Hey! Would anyone be willing to critique my case? I have the case outlined, not complete yet. But I could still use some input.

If it's Team Policy (NCFCA), I guess I can.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2014 6:01 pm 
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Can I have a 1AC critiqued? And if so do I just post it here?


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2014 6:13 pm 
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Anyone can get their 1AC critiqued, so yes. :) Typically, people post saying that they want a 1AC critiqued, and anyone who is willing to critique it will either post here or private message you. Then you can communicate with whoever volunteered and send them a copy of the 1AC (through email, google docs, copy and pasting in a pm...whatever you want). You can post the 1AC here if you want to, but I would recommend just sending it privately to individual people.

I'd be willing to critique your 1AC, if you'd like. If you want me to critique it, just send it to me at marinadelayne[at]cox.net. And welcome to HSD, btw!! :D

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 1:14 am 
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Anthony Severin (Sharkfin) gave us an excellent 1AC critique, and he says he has some free time, meaning you'll get feedback quick. Drop him a line.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2015 7:25 pm 
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I'd be interested in having me and my partner's case critiqued if possible.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 10:31 pm 
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ShaynePC wrote:
Who are you and your partner?


Anastasi/Anastasi. We're from region ten, it's my second year doing team policy with the NCFCA, and my partner/brother's first year. I heard about this forum the end of last year but didn't get to registering until just recently.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2015 12:40 am 
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Cool maybe we'll run into you at the New Jersey qualifier or regionals!

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Believe it or not I did meet Madison at the last qualifier I went to (Three Rivers).

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